Mechanics Narrative and Description

<p>If you've ever reviewed a story or article where the author was struggling with the mechanics of written English left you confused about the piece's place and time or overwhelmed with details <em>Mechanics Narrative and Description</em> is for you.</p><p>In this book long-time critique group leader Ross Lampert (a.k.a. The Critique Doctor) provides detailed practical articles on how to help you and your critique partners improve your:</p><p>· Spelling punctuation grammar capitalization and more</p><p>· Narrative that is their authorial voice and style balancing showing and telling using too many words or too few continuity problems etc.</p><p>· Description whether it's vague or too detailed full of info-dumps of unnecessary detail provide inconsistent or contradictory details and so on.</p><p>Each article ends with questions you can ask yourself about the piece you're reviewing to identify the exact problem you're seeing and offer the author usable critique.</p>